-They met. They clicked. She fell in love.
Felt like a match made from above.
Being with him gave her the best feeling in the world
Until she found out there was another girl.
She demanded answers, but he denied.
She noticed that he wouldn't meet her eye.
She longed to forgive, but it was to late.
Her first real love had another mate.
She said to him, "I thought you were the one.
But you were unfaithful. So we're done."-
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Felt like a match made from above.
Being with him gave her the best feeling in the world
Until she found out there was another girl.
She demanded answers, but he denied.
She noticed that he wouldn't meet her eye.
She longed to forgive, but it was to late.
Her first real love had another mate.
She said to him, "I thought you were the one.
But you were unfaithful. So we're done."-
Is this a good poem? If not, what can I do to make it better? Thanks for your help!