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At about 2am, in the morning on Saturday 22nd September 1934, an explosion occurred in the Dennis Section of Gresford Colliery, just outside Wrexham, in Denbighshire, Wales. More than 200 men and boys died.
The explosion was caused by gas and is blamed on the company manager because he was warned by Tomlinson but the manager didn't want to loose money for his company so he ignored him.
The family's affected by the explosion were sent white lilies but they were not pleased because they did not get money from the manager. One of the worker's wife had said " i can't believe it! I have lost my husband and my kids have lost their father and all they give us is some white lilies for the funeral!" Everyone is very upset about the explosion , many loved ones have been lost. Please help by giving a donation to the Lord Mayor of London to help the families of the worker's who have died. The manager of the company is now in court and is sure to be punished and should pay some money to the families of worker's who have died. To help even more Lord Mayor of London is collecting donations so please donate to help families who have been affected by the disaster.
At about 2am, in the morning on Saturday 22nd September 1934, an explosion occurred in the Dennis Section of Gresford Colliery, just outside Wrexham, in Denbighshire, Wales. More than 200 men and boys died.
The explosion was caused by gas and is blamed on the company manager because he was warned by Tomlinson but the manager didn't want to loose money for his company so he ignored him.
The family's affected by the explosion were sent white lilies but they were not pleased because they did not get money from the manager. One of the worker's wife had said " i can't believe it! I have lost my husband and my kids have lost their father and all they give us is some white lilies for the funeral!" Everyone is very upset about the explosion , many loved ones have been lost. Please help by giving a donation to the Lord Mayor of London to help the families of the worker's who have died. The manager of the company is now in court and is sure to be punished and should pay some money to the families of worker's who have died. To help even more Lord Mayor of London is collecting donations so please donate to help families who have been affected by the disaster.