Is this considered poetry?

Fire Man!

New member
I wrote this and really it sounds more like either A: a crappy rap B: misguided poetry or C: garbage that kinda rhymes or D: (insert very own opinion here). What do you think?

You said you were my friend
you even said you loved me as a friend
but turns out you never even cared for me
all those hugs and compliments were lies
sheeps wool pulled over my eyes
all the rules of friend ship you defied and lied
but for what
to put me down on my kness at this time
hell thats why i even wrote this rhyme
because you hurt me so bad the only option was to cry
and whine and think about all the good times
that we had together before I knew it was all a lie
that you gave me as you said "Happy Birthday" and left me with tears in my eyes asking god why.
 
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