Is this business-like e-mail succinct or does it make sense?

migraine

New member
Could you please take time to make it pretty concise?
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Dear Gomez (supervisor of the security Dept.),

Thank you all for your action as stated in the previous mail.

But this morning we still have problem with the Security team at the gate. Many times Jacques and I liaised with Security Guard but they denied these new drivers access to the Plant for the training course.


Could you please support us for the matter. From tommorrow morning, Human Recources Dept. will make a list and inform to Secutity staff before any training course or Interview...

Thanks and best regards.
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