is this an ok song i wrote my girlfriend?

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Nick

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im 14 and i realize it is scratchy and has spelling errors those will be fixed but what do you think?



Chorus
Started off as just a friendship didn't know where it could go
ended up falling in love and now obviously i know
it's not just a dream or something in my head
it's thinking about you before i go too bed
waking up remembering the dream i had of you
wondering if you dreamed of me too
your the girl every guy wishes they had
and i got you it's like im going mad

Verse 1
your beautiful eyes caught my attention
i think i need some kind of intervention
we got people wondering did this all happen way too fast
but it's not the speed it's that im happy at last
your smile gives me butterflies on an on all day
and i finally have too say

Chorus
started off as just a friendship didn't know where it could go
ended up falling in love and now obviously i know
it's not just a dream or something in my head
it's thinking about you before i go too bed
waking up remembering the dream i had of you
wondering if you dreamed of me too
your the girl every guy wishes they had
and i got you it's like i going mad

Verse 2
and it's like need you more than ever
how about you and me forever?
and finally reality is better than my dreams
its killing me
and the way we talk has finally got me singing

Chorus
started off as just a friendship didn't know where it could go
ended up falling in love and now obviously i know
it's not just a dream or something in my head
it's thinking about you before i go too bed
waking up remembering the dream i had of you
wondering if you dreamed of me too
your the girl every guy wishes they had
and i got you it's like i going mad
 
you wrote this question earlier and i said it was good...now you fixed it up alot and its GREAT! sing it to her and play it on guitar...thats sooo sweet! :)
 
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