Is this an iambic pentameter/sonnet? Rate poem too! please? :)?

K_N11

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The day, my heart collapsed without making a sound
I scream and shout, these memories will never erase
Every time I see you, it makes my heart pound
A part of me you will never replace
As, the pale white moon hangs over my head
I lie there in my bed, crying my eyes out
You make me feel like I'm already dead
I memories of you start to fade out
And I breathe in the promise of your love
Now that your gone, I am sad ans alone
Sometimes, I wish there was help from above
The future of us is very unknown
When you realize that you were very wrong
And it is with me, you truly belong
 
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