I need to write a paragraph about anything, it has to have one epic(homeric) simile. If theres anything that needs editing or sounds weird, tell me what it is. Thanks
A family is like a strand of DNA, interconnected and joined together, we need each other to strive and live better lives. Although you get tired of your siblings or parents sometimes, just move along and be thankful to God you have them everyday, because you don’t know the importance of their presence until you lose them. We lose each other sometimes, it takes a while to heal, and like a strand of damaged DNA, we heal after a period of time.
A family is like a strand of DNA, interconnected and joined together, we need each other to strive and live better lives. Although you get tired of your siblings or parents sometimes, just move along and be thankful to God you have them everyday, because you don’t know the importance of their presence until you lose them. We lose each other sometimes, it takes a while to heal, and like a strand of damaged DNA, we heal after a period of time.