is this a qood poem i was inspired by romeo and juliet? ((:?

Clarissa

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Death may be as a sweet as lovers kiss
And life as evil as the flames of hell
Nothing is eternal but the time in which we all exist
Time is never ending and never changing
It is thy worst enemy yet thy closest lover
We shall love one another
As time will soon take away thy lover AND thy enemy
Some may live to die and others may live to love
Which shall thy be?
The one in which loves or the one that will die in sorrow?





im a 15 year old qirl, okay so i may not be that qood or i may not even be qood at all but i just want feed back. ((: thanks
 
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