Is this a nice poem for a girl at my school that I like?

Eddie-lee

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Ok so there's this new girl at my school and she's Beautiful. We've talked a few times and she told me she's into poetry so I wrote a poem for her
I want your opinions on it before I give it to her

Chances are I'm jumpin the gun.
I guess I'm predicting there's something to come.
In my world your number is one.
In your world my number is none cause you don't know me yet.
I've been watching jottin notes.
On how I could aproach don't stop me though.
From a distance we locked eyes.
I got blind from the way ya spotlight shines.
Maybe then was not the right time.
I don't care I went home to jot some tight lines.
If we kiss we rob the sky blind.
Cause the stars wanna gossip alright fine.
I poor you a glass of wine while I roll up a dime.
I don't know if you smoke but I know that you fly.
High, like you toatin a line.
That's green, I know that ain't go over ya mind.
 
OMG! your not actually going to give that to her.. are you. Apart from being corny too the MAX Some of it sounds like your stalking her and the end sounds like a very bad, very cheesy rock 'n' Roll song.
 
OMG! your not actually going to give that to her.. are you. Apart from being corny too the MAX Some of it sounds like your stalking her and the end sounds like a very bad, very cheesy rock 'n' Roll song.
 
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