Is this a good villanelle?

Kitkat2453

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Its about animal abuse. I had to write it for an english project..

It’s just too bad,
All the preventable fears,
The broken heart they’ve had.

All the dripping tears,
All the blood that smears,
It’s just too bad.

Left at the bottom of the stairs,
All the chains pulling at their hairs,
The broken heart they’ve had.

No one ever appears,
But they always raise their ears,
It’s just too bad.

The food that isn’t theirs,
The giving of sad and depressed stares,
The broken heart they’ve had.

Over all these long years,
Why hasn’t He answered their prayers?
It’s just too bad,
The broken heart they’ve had.
 
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