Is this a good title, does it draw you in...? Can I think of something better...?

The title I made up is:

The Daxter Locke Chronicles: A Spirit Guardian's Tale...

It's about a boy who learns he's a Spirit Guardian from another dimension. Spirit Guardians guard something called the ancient Spirit Relics, royal family heirlooms that are used by people to jump from dimension to dimension. When they're stolen, he and his three friends (all 13 year old kids born in the Golden Age [which is the age that an evil man named Caius rose from the ashes of evil from the last generation]) mus travel to the Far Side of the dimension and rescue the Relics to restore peace to their people, and so that Daxter can return home.

This is the picture of the Dimension's Royal City and Castle, also the preferred title picture:

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Is the title interesting, or could I choose something better? I want to include the main character's name (Daxter Locke) in the title. Any help or suggestions? Thanks in advance ^-^
 
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