Is this a good story Idea?

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Awesome Albert

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I have 9 chapters of a book i am writing. I will show you the first one and tell me if it anything good .The first paragraph is what should go on the back of the book. If you like the first chapter, i will post up the other 8 in my blog. Leave comments and kudos on blog.

http://blog.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=blog.view&friendID=278158442&blogID=447713871

I am only 14, tell me what i need to improve on also.
 
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