My heart fell apart around five years ago
All her beauty is unable to be surpassed
This stir inside my heart overwhelms me so,
She makes my heart burn as if it will not last.
I wish to talk to her but I cannot,
To talk to me would make her a great fool
Perhaps the fool is me for giving barely forethought,
But being so alone is not too cool.
If only she were a little less cute,
I might have the courage to talk to her
But even if I did, I would have a large commute
To go to her house for just a small dinner.
But maybe just maybe there is a slight chance,
That there is some room for a little romance.
any minor suggestions?
All her beauty is unable to be surpassed
This stir inside my heart overwhelms me so,
She makes my heart burn as if it will not last.
I wish to talk to her but I cannot,
To talk to me would make her a great fool
Perhaps the fool is me for giving barely forethought,
But being so alone is not too cool.
If only she were a little less cute,
I might have the courage to talk to her
But even if I did, I would have a large commute
To go to her house for just a small dinner.
But maybe just maybe there is a slight chance,
That there is some room for a little romance.
any minor suggestions?