Is this a good song i wrote?

Natalie

New member
This song i wrote for myself well it was meant for my parents because my parents divorced but anyways tell me if this is a good song (i have no title for it D:)

Verse 1:

(Three words 3x)

Seeing you like this..
It just tears me apart
Mommy you shed your tears..
Yet you are so strong
It feels so long..
Since you felt this way

Verse 2:

Daddy you argue saying 'Thats not what i meant'
So what did you mean?
Seing you two fight..
it just isnt right..

Chorus:

If this is for the best
Then tell me why am i in tears? (im not gunna choose)
Mommy's in tears and Daddy's screamin'
I just wanna hear those three words.. (Three words)

Verse 3:

So we fight..
Throguh the pain
Those tears of yours just tears me apart..
So tell me why..

(Repeat chorus)

End of chorus

Why is is so hard to say those three words?
 
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