Is this a good poem?I wrote it when i was 11.?

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Poem name:You win.

Liein here
all alone
Iv been hurt
and its shown.

i love you
You love me
Why cant these people
just let it be?

Oh i get it
Act like you dont want me
I get it
but why must you taunt me?

Thats it
you win
Please stop
you win.



Bye Gabriella Nicole
Age 11
 
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