Is this a good poem? I wrote it and it is supposed to be artistic/avant...

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...garde/experimental poetry.? lily, she’s not very pretty
she’s not very ugly
she’s not alone
she’s not a hermit
she’s not happy
she’s not sad
she’s not passionate
she’s not very dull
so what the hell is she?
Lily
she’s American
she’s European
she’s always funny
she’s paternalistic
she’s clumsy
she’s a queen
she’s a maid
she’s political
she’s annoying
she’s not left
she’s not right
she’s not wrong
she’s not everywhere
she’s not with you
she’s not presentable
she’s not one to be hidden
she’s not a fan of you
she’s not a fan of me
she’s not a fan of herself
she’s not a virtue
she’s not a vice.


tell me what you think!
 
hmmmm.
it was kind of enjoyable, but i don't feel like the repetitiveness does anything for the poem. it seems sort of predictable.
 
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