is this a good poem I want to be a poet when i get older?

Hoona_2011

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im 16 and love writing and want to be a poet when i get older for little kids. is this a good poem for little kids??

If you saw a lion walking on the street, what do you do? Do you turn and shriek?

If you saw a bear in a pair of underwear, do you stop and stare? Or do you really care?

If you saw a deer looking in a mirror, do you run in fear and yell “O DEAR”

If you saw a fox in a tiny sandbox with the chicken pox would you take him to see the Boston Red Sox?

If you saw a Bugs Bunny rolling in money, would you think it’s funny and fall on your tummy

If you saw a cat, lying in a hat, playing with a baseball bat. Would you stay to chat?

If you saw a snake, carrying a pancake, while dancing on a lake, would you hit it with a rake or take it out for a shake?


What would you do...
 
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