IS this a good poem for my girl?

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Glen B

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I only want love from you
I want to see ur pretty face
I want to give you my love
I want to lock you in my heart
I love the feeling when we kiss
I know u hate it when I fart
When we are apart I only miss
I hope you know where this came from
your so amazing and so ticklish
I cant wait till I take you to prom!
 
very beautiful poem, one thing, FART?? it'd be even more wonderful if u made it all rhyme, only parts do. but think it over, try to see if u can make it flow. but this is good work, especially for a guy! great job, take out fart and she'll LOVE it, promise, wul only if she's a poem kinda girl!!
*;)
 
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