Is this a good love poem?

Collin A

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Maybe its a one way street, maybe your ground is stood but I'm hopin a poets words will love you the way I should
for the first time, i'm goin huntin dear
just to clear the romance counsciounce ive been fightin all year
Everytime that song plays I hear the sound of falling in love again.
Hearts unbreaking, stomach's aching
Who could win my one emotion you've won? None but you can do what you've done.
God knows heaven sent your soul to calm the lonely in mine.I wanna tell ya I l adore you yet the pain spits out every line
We all see I'm kinda awkward and you hear when i go mute, awing the way you smile at me and pretend that its cute. Please don't allege your hazels haven't seen my greens dreaming scenes of possibilities when I'm your man and i'll think about ya merely 'cause I can
All I want is a girl who will make me a romantic saint
I never learned what love is but you can teach me what it ain't.
I've said that I'm crazy, for you. I wanna say why I'm writin: let mine be the eyes that spies your hazels brighten
This boy's got an offer. Its sure to raise hell
Ill give you my greens to only see your hazel
Who would should could need a touch when my minds driftin like feather
Don't tell me we are just tell me we belong together
I don't need a title; I just want you to approve me
To think about you only when I think of joys to move me

Just tell me if its worth giving to a girl and possibly suggest ways to improve. Thanks in advance
 
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