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Okay its a really nice story....hopefully.....
these two girls, Rhea (oldest) and Suzette (aka Suzy; youngest) have divorced parents. They live with their mom but every month they have to visit their father. He abuses them alot. So they have this plan to run away from him and go back to their mother. Unfortunately their plan doesn't work as well as they hoped and they get caught by the father and i think you can guess what happens after that. They try it again, this time they didn't make what they were doing to obvious and they escape....but as fate would have it, they get lost. At the same time as they are walking it starts to por down and they run into the first venue they can find. The place they find has an indoor concert playing and the girls get so infatuated with the music that they want to meet the band. They cant find anyone in the band afterwards but then they spy the lead singer walking home and they follow him. He turns out to be the kind that doesnt like kids and soon
after he hears the girls' story he turns out to have a soft side for them. The girls return home to their "father" because they had to other choice. He then....you know.
Night after night the girls go to see the band play music whenever they can and soon afterwards the lead singer (still trying to find a name) wants to help them reveal their "father" for the crook for he really is. (After all the sisters couldn't tell people what he was doing to them for fear of more abuse).
Well anyways i have a really sweet ending but for now just tell me if it sounds good....so far
im 13 btw.......so it might not be as good as i think it is XD
i thought of this like.....15 mins ago.....so it does have holes....
and the mom doesnt know that theyre getting abused........
these two girls, Rhea (oldest) and Suzette (aka Suzy; youngest) have divorced parents. They live with their mom but every month they have to visit their father. He abuses them alot. So they have this plan to run away from him and go back to their mother. Unfortunately their plan doesn't work as well as they hoped and they get caught by the father and i think you can guess what happens after that. They try it again, this time they didn't make what they were doing to obvious and they escape....but as fate would have it, they get lost. At the same time as they are walking it starts to por down and they run into the first venue they can find. The place they find has an indoor concert playing and the girls get so infatuated with the music that they want to meet the band. They cant find anyone in the band afterwards but then they spy the lead singer walking home and they follow him. He turns out to be the kind that doesnt like kids and soon
after he hears the girls' story he turns out to have a soft side for them. The girls return home to their "father" because they had to other choice. He then....you know.
Night after night the girls go to see the band play music whenever they can and soon afterwards the lead singer (still trying to find a name) wants to help them reveal their "father" for the crook for he really is. (After all the sisters couldn't tell people what he was doing to them for fear of more abuse).
Well anyways i have a really sweet ending but for now just tell me if it sounds good....so far
im 13 btw.......so it might not be as good as i think it is XD
i thought of this like.....15 mins ago.....so it does have holes....
and the mom doesnt know that theyre getting abused........