D Dd Ss New member May 20, 2011 #1 L’amour L’amour n’est complexe elle exige un espirit empty et un coeur present -translated- Love Love is not complex It demands an empty mind and a present heart Plz Remember, This is a HAIKU so 5-7-5
L’amour L’amour n’est complexe elle exige un espirit empty et un coeur present -translated- Love Love is not complex It demands an empty mind and a present heart Plz Remember, This is a HAIKU so 5-7-5
Z Zachary New member May 20, 2011 #2 It's a good start and that's all it will be unless you expand and add more stanzas
R Rachel Salazar New member May 31, 2011 #4 Just saying, traditional haikus don't have the title in the actual poem. And they normally don't start with nouns. Also, isn't the second line 8 syllables? elle ex-ige un es-pirit emp-ty
Just saying, traditional haikus don't have the title in the actual poem. And they normally don't start with nouns. Also, isn't the second line 8 syllables? elle ex-ige un es-pirit emp-ty