Is this a good attention-getting sentence?

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“Should women be able to fight in combat in our armed forces?” - When this question is asked, a woman is usually the first to state her rights, reminding everyone that she can do anything a man can do.

how can correct this sentence... or make it better? topic sentences are the worst
 
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