Is there any mistakes in my free verse poem about Marc Chagall(the artist)?

teobeo94

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He wrote the poem in Paris,
Where he spent most of his adult life,
Often painting pictures
Can such expressions belong in any category,
If not in a world of dreams?
Where fantasy, nostalgia, and religion are so surreal

He saw a fiddler playing in a Paris Street,
Recalling his village musician,
Giving a concert from the rooftops

He saw young people dancing,
And he remembered his wife Bella when she was young,
And how he lifted her with joy into the air

And when he walked down the Champs Elysses,
he sees before his eyes the little streets of Vitebsk.



Can it be improved? Is it too short since have to do this for my AP art history class
 
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