As if he himself was writing the poem in Paris
where he spent most of his adult life,
often painting a picture
such expressions belong in no category
as of it is a dream world
When he sees a fiddler playing in a Paris Street
He remember his village musician
seated on the rooftops of a house
When he sees young people dancing in the streets of Paris,
He remembers his wife Bella when she was young
and he lifted her with joy
When he walks down the Champs Elysses
He recall the little streets of Vitebsk
Can it be improved? Is it too short since have to do this for my AP art history class
where he spent most of his adult life,
often painting a picture
such expressions belong in no category
as of it is a dream world
When he sees a fiddler playing in a Paris Street
He remember his village musician
seated on the rooftops of a house
When he sees young people dancing in the streets of Paris,
He remembers his wife Bella when she was young
and he lifted her with joy
When he walks down the Champs Elysses
He recall the little streets of Vitebsk
Can it be improved? Is it too short since have to do this for my AP art history class