is my sonnet AT ALL good?

Kar Pay

New member
In life we all ask for something decent
no looking, finding or effort at all
you ask it to be given as a present
sometimes you wait for the internal call

time is ticking and you are standing around
you cannot sit you cannot wait for it
never will the boulder come down
only you can get that small candle lit

amazing people will help with timing
lights are big and glorious with greatness
you relax and feel the sun is shining
you cannot and will not feel any less

to men and women all around the earth
this golden wisdom and prize is happiness

PLEASE TELL ME IF IT IS GOOD AND HOW I CAN CHANGE IT
 
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