Is my sister good at poetry..?

[Hannah Floral]

Shes 12. And I think shes amazing, but I was wondering what you thought? xx

Death was all I could see in her shadowed black eyes.,
A tear of red blood, drip, drip, someone dies.
No life, no joy in her threatening stare,
Is there someone behind me, hello are you there?

xx

 

[Move on]

I don't really know poetry but this is the best I've read on Y/A, ever !