Is my poetry good at all?

[Mona]

Really good...

 

[Katrina]

Adequately symbolized
Choosy
Passionate
Obsessive
Ardent
Compulsive
Indulgent
Intense
Fervent
Thought-provoking
Fastidious
Avid
Heartfelt
Cordial
Splendid
Jam-packed of sentiments
Genial
Emotional
Submissive

Terms are fewer 2 communicate the infatuation uncovered in this poem.

I away from uncertainty appreciate this poem by heart!!!!

This poem gets 10/10

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Yours straightforwardly,
K@TRIN@

 

[Josh]

You need to be yourself
I am nobody else
I will never grow old
I live in now and now is forever
I never live and die
I never live I lie
Take me up to the top I wanna hold the sky
And Shape my mind and walk on the rain
Let the morning rain soak your soul
Forever we
Will Dream things they'll never dream
Will be things they'll never be

 

[Aleeex123]

8/10 its ok just work on the depth of it make it more touching. cut out the cheesy bits but its good

 

[Aleeex123]

8/10 its ok just work on the depth of it make it more touching. cut out the cheesy bits but its good

 

[Spicer]

It's a bit cheesy at parts, but you're way better at writing poems than me, I've always been absolutely horrible at it.