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studygirl001
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Ok, so I love to write poetry. I don't think it is any good. Can you give me your honest opinion? Thank you so so so much. I don't care if you say it's horrible.
1. Water's Slow Flow
Water, Water
Flowing Here,
Flowing There,
Flowing Everywhere.
I love water and it mesmerized stings me
But I don't even Care.
The water has me
Mesmerized.
The Next Poems are Shakespearean Sonnets
2. Water. Water, water , water know I love you
I wish i could be near you today
But I still know that what I have to do
Is taking me a different new way
It's taking me to a more broken place
And I will never your face again
Even thought I love your beautiful face.
I hop I will see you again, but when?
I know I will always love the water.
On water I will never lay a hand
And even as these same days get hotter
I will never enjoy being on land
An I would even be running away
If I could be near water today.
2. Love
Loving You is the hardest thing to do.
You know your eyes sparking in the sunlight
But I cannot deny that I love you.
I can't wait to se you tomorrow night.
When I see you I can't help but smile.
I can only thing that this will never be.
I told you I loved you and all the while
I thought you would never see the real me.
Love is complicated and I can say
I love you and you broke my heart in two
But when you see me you only say hey.
That word is music to my ears and you
Fill my mind with all the sights of beauty.
Heart-break must be just a community.
4. My Best Friend
My newest best friend is all that I need
Because she would never disappoint me.
We'll be doing all that we can to heed
Any way to save a great deal of trees.
She is everything I am looking for
In a friend and I can truthfully say
That she has every quality and more
Like the quality to show me the way
To a better life I almost have now
Because my new best friend has gotten me
Close to a new life and has shown me how
To be better and gotten me to be
A much better and a much happier
Girl and I would cut living wood for her.
5. Poetry
Poetry is like magic on paper.
Nothing ever compares to the beauty
Of poetry but it’s just like vapor.
It leaves sometimes but it knows its duty
To never leave without having impact
On the lives of some people because they
Know that they need it and that’s just the fact
That poetry shows them the better way.
Poetry influences everything.
No matter when life brings you something bad
Whether its fall, summer, winter or spring
Poetry can keep you from being sad.
Over this long year, I fell in love with
This thing called poetry; that’s not a myth.
6.Waiting
Waiting can be the hardest thing to do
But every day something is waited for.
We all hate waiting like we hate the flu
But waiting is something that you explore.
When you explore something like waiting, you
Could finsomethingng that you really enjoy.
Finding that one thing you love sticks like glue
And now you see waiting can bring you joy.
Sonething so painful can be so helpful
And something like waiting must be magic
Because it could never be unhelpful.
It is magic and it is not tragic
Beucase when you wait you must learn something
Important even if it’s about spring.
Those are the only ones I have right now that I want people to see and give their opinion on because my other ones I think are just a little obsessive over the environment because I'm this big environment girl. Please be completely open and honest. Thank You so so much!
1. Water's Slow Flow
Water, Water
Flowing Here,
Flowing There,
Flowing Everywhere.
I love water and it mesmerized stings me
But I don't even Care.
The water has me
Mesmerized.
The Next Poems are Shakespearean Sonnets
2. Water. Water, water , water know I love you
I wish i could be near you today
But I still know that what I have to do
Is taking me a different new way
It's taking me to a more broken place
And I will never your face again
Even thought I love your beautiful face.
I hop I will see you again, but when?
I know I will always love the water.
On water I will never lay a hand
And even as these same days get hotter
I will never enjoy being on land
An I would even be running away
If I could be near water today.
2. Love
Loving You is the hardest thing to do.
You know your eyes sparking in the sunlight
But I cannot deny that I love you.
I can't wait to se you tomorrow night.
When I see you I can't help but smile.
I can only thing that this will never be.
I told you I loved you and all the while
I thought you would never see the real me.
Love is complicated and I can say
I love you and you broke my heart in two
But when you see me you only say hey.
That word is music to my ears and you
Fill my mind with all the sights of beauty.
Heart-break must be just a community.
4. My Best Friend
My newest best friend is all that I need
Because she would never disappoint me.
We'll be doing all that we can to heed
Any way to save a great deal of trees.
She is everything I am looking for
In a friend and I can truthfully say
That she has every quality and more
Like the quality to show me the way
To a better life I almost have now
Because my new best friend has gotten me
Close to a new life and has shown me how
To be better and gotten me to be
A much better and a much happier
Girl and I would cut living wood for her.
5. Poetry
Poetry is like magic on paper.
Nothing ever compares to the beauty
Of poetry but it’s just like vapor.
It leaves sometimes but it knows its duty
To never leave without having impact
On the lives of some people because they
Know that they need it and that’s just the fact
That poetry shows them the better way.
Poetry influences everything.
No matter when life brings you something bad
Whether its fall, summer, winter or spring
Poetry can keep you from being sad.
Over this long year, I fell in love with
This thing called poetry; that’s not a myth.
6.Waiting
Waiting can be the hardest thing to do
But every day something is waited for.
We all hate waiting like we hate the flu
But waiting is something that you explore.
When you explore something like waiting, you
Could finsomethingng that you really enjoy.
Finding that one thing you love sticks like glue
And now you see waiting can bring you joy.
Sonething so painful can be so helpful
And something like waiting must be magic
Because it could never be unhelpful.
It is magic and it is not tragic
Beucase when you wait you must learn something
Important even if it’s about spring.
Those are the only ones I have right now that I want people to see and give their opinion on because my other ones I think are just a little obsessive over the environment because I'm this big environment girl. Please be completely open and honest. Thank You so so much!