Is my poem okay:)????

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_Voice of a Little Boy_
I can hear the voice
of a little boy
too scared and afraid
in failures and
committing mistakes.
I told him whenever,
there is failure, there
has to be success.
He listened to me.
And now,
I can hear the voice
of a little boy
enjoying life more
and learning from his mistakes.



_Embarrassed_
People staring at me,
looking at me wildly,
laughing like a bunch
of hyenas.
My cheeks begin to burn.
They're laughing at me!
I try to make a smile,
so they won't think I'm hurt,
but deep inside this
shattered heart of mine,
I am deeply,
deeply embarrassed.
 
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