Let's just say that it's homework.
Is it too short? Too depressing? Too crap lol? Please share you opinions
"My life, my story, is like a book, left out in the falling rain. You turn the soggy pages
and the soppy pages tear apart into smaller soggier pieces. The hidden words, the black ink,
is smudged and gently dripping onto your fingertips. You put down the book and smile. My book
is of no importance because I smile back at you, pretending I'm alright. But you don't understand, and
you will never understand because these hidden words, those faded letters... are my true feelings.
I am sorry... I'm sorry you cannot read my thoughts. The cover is smiling, but inside... I am dying."
I copied and pasted it, sorry it doesn't look very neat :/
'In Pursuit of Happiness' yours is a lot better. You turn my feelings into a proper poem. Thank you
Is it too short? Too depressing? Too crap lol? Please share you opinions
"My life, my story, is like a book, left out in the falling rain. You turn the soggy pages
and the soppy pages tear apart into smaller soggier pieces. The hidden words, the black ink,
is smudged and gently dripping onto your fingertips. You put down the book and smile. My book
is of no importance because I smile back at you, pretending I'm alright. But you don't understand, and
you will never understand because these hidden words, those faded letters... are my true feelings.
I am sorry... I'm sorry you cannot read my thoughts. The cover is smiling, but inside... I am dying."
I copied and pasted it, sorry it doesn't look very neat :/
'In Pursuit of Happiness' yours is a lot better. You turn my feelings into a proper poem. Thank you