Is my haiku right? Not a good writer btw?

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Ralfies Gurl

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Im making a Poem book for my Eng. 3 class and im not sure if im doing this right. Could you please lend me a hand? Im not very good at poems. Thank you.


Withering tree sways
Whistling in the winds
Singing its song
Withering tree sways
Whistling in the winds
Whispering its sad song


Better or worse?
 
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