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Brianna Lynne
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Ok, so my main male and female character were talking or more like insulting on the females part. So here is how the conversation goes.
"Wow, I didn't know they let twelve year olds in here." I retorted.
"Actually for your information I recently turned eighteen."
"Big deal just two year old then me."
"Almost two and a half.
"Huh?" I replied dumbly in my confusion.
"I was born on October 31st. You were born on March 12th making us nearly two and a half years apart."
"How do you know my birthday? You are seriously freaking me out, Edward Cullen." I nearly yelled with my eyes widening in horror.
"It's Noctavian, deary." he said as he walked away from me.
Should I take the Edward Cullen part out? Especially because Noctavian ( NOT A VAMPIRE ) is a telepath?
Oh, she barely knows him. So that's why him knowing her birthday freaks her out. That and her randomly shows up as a new student at her private school.
"Wow, I didn't know they let twelve year olds in here." I retorted.
"Actually for your information I recently turned eighteen."
"Big deal just two year old then me."
"Almost two and a half.
"Huh?" I replied dumbly in my confusion.
"I was born on October 31st. You were born on March 12th making us nearly two and a half years apart."
"How do you know my birthday? You are seriously freaking me out, Edward Cullen." I nearly yelled with my eyes widening in horror.
"It's Noctavian, deary." he said as he walked away from me.
Should I take the Edward Cullen part out? Especially because Noctavian ( NOT A VAMPIRE ) is a telepath?
Oh, she barely knows him. So that's why him knowing her birthday freaks her out. That and her randomly shows up as a new student at her private school.