Indie poet wants critiques?

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So I wrote this poem. Kinda spur of the moment, but it was about God looking down on Earth and wondering whether or not giving humans free will was a good decision. I really want it critiqued, but due to my age and it's graphic nature (and I mean graphic!), I'm afraid to post it anywhere. The person who I did show it to though was very impressed by it, but was at the same time horrified. I spent quite a bit of time on it, and I was inspired by the writing style of William S. Burroughs. Does anyone know of a website that I could get a critique for a work like this? Thanks!
 
Lots of poetry sites has rules you have to go by.
The poems usually can't promote hatred, nothing illegal, no racism, umm sometimes sexual poems are not allowed. Just Google poetry forums or sites and read the rules.
 
I have a Yahoo Group if you're interested in joining. It's called Emotional Poet's Society and is open to all. All I ask is you don't post anything pornographic.

The link is:

http://emotionalpoetssociety.yolasite.com

Of course, you can always post it to the poetry section of Yahoo Answers. There are many poets on here who are wonderful people, just watch out for the trolls.
 
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