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okay so the assignment is write a poem about an animal that connects to one of the seven deadly sins i choose the lion and pride. this is what i have so far but i need help with a word to put after the and.
“The Lion”
King of the jungle
As he walks with his head held high
No one can touch him
For he is the king of the jungle
Walking around roaring loud
As he sends a fright
With his terrifying gaze
I am king he roars again
Animals watch as he prances by
They stare with fear
Some with jealousy
And
also if theres anything else that isnt right could you give me some advice on how to fix it?
p.s i know it sucks! =]
“The Lion”
King of the jungle
As he walks with his head held high
No one can touch him
For he is the king of the jungle
Walking around roaring loud
As he sends a fright
With his terrifying gaze
I am king he roars again
Animals watch as he prances by
They stare with fear
Some with jealousy
And
also if theres anything else that isnt right could you give me some advice on how to fix it?
p.s i know it sucks! =]