I'm trying to write this poem and as you can see I need help?

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I did it all just for him

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Here's what I have so far:
Gold upon the tomb
of love
A treasure only kept
for dead
to feel the touch of love again,
go 6 feet under...
I need help
can you help me get farther on this poem?
or is it like a lost cause?

**I'm asking it here too, because the people in the poetry section aren't really helping much.
Thanks
 
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