I'm trying to write something for my girlfriend, how does this sound (See details)?

Randy Lawrence

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It's my first time actually writing something like this so I don't know if this is horrible or alright... So what do you think, if it's alright but not written properly, how would you put it? Thanks!
(To me it sounds HORRIBLE, i suck)

You make me happy, smile, and laugh when I'm with you :). I just want to spend every single second with you, even if it means to stand out in the cold. Sure my mind goes blank at times and i end up being quiet but I still want to just be with you <3
Wish I were with you tonight...
 
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