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Mickey Sparks
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...an army officer? Can someone proofread my essay for me??-- THANKS!--
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On September 11th, 2001 a great disaster unfolded inside the United States. Terrorists had plucked a feather from the eagle of liberty but there was no way they were bringing this bird down. The price of freedom is eternal vigilance. However, I am committed to being eternally vigilant as an officer in the United States Army.
When the two towers fell, I was mad at them attacking our majestic country. I wanted to know why they hated us because of our freedoms and I almost dropped out of college to pursue exactly that course. The tragedy culminating on September 11th made me realize that freedom isn’t free. I think that all the troops deserve special thanks and praise for helping our nation be what it is today. I am thankful for my teachers for my ability to read and write. But I am thankful to the troops for my ability to do so in English.
On 9/11 the evil specter of international terrorism materialized on our shores and in the heartland of our great country. In a world in the midst of global terrorism I think it is important that we have officers ready to serve on behalf of our country. As a result of the tragedy that befell us on September 11th, 2001 I would like to be in the army to help defend our freedoms.
I went to college for five years before I went to college I went to highschool for four years. I was good at sports because I had the instincts of a cat, the muscle of a bull, and the heart of a lion. I think my experiences in life can carry me forward to peak performance in a career in the United States armed services.
Thank you for your time. I am confident that this board’s diligence to duty will lead to a successful commissioning of me into the armed forces.
Thank you.
Thankfully,
Marc “Trubbie” Goldstein
I got a college degree.. and its for being an officer. I was told i need an essay. and writing isnt my strong point
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On September 11th, 2001 a great disaster unfolded inside the United States. Terrorists had plucked a feather from the eagle of liberty but there was no way they were bringing this bird down. The price of freedom is eternal vigilance. However, I am committed to being eternally vigilant as an officer in the United States Army.
When the two towers fell, I was mad at them attacking our majestic country. I wanted to know why they hated us because of our freedoms and I almost dropped out of college to pursue exactly that course. The tragedy culminating on September 11th made me realize that freedom isn’t free. I think that all the troops deserve special thanks and praise for helping our nation be what it is today. I am thankful for my teachers for my ability to read and write. But I am thankful to the troops for my ability to do so in English.
On 9/11 the evil specter of international terrorism materialized on our shores and in the heartland of our great country. In a world in the midst of global terrorism I think it is important that we have officers ready to serve on behalf of our country. As a result of the tragedy that befell us on September 11th, 2001 I would like to be in the army to help defend our freedoms.
I went to college for five years before I went to college I went to highschool for four years. I was good at sports because I had the instincts of a cat, the muscle of a bull, and the heart of a lion. I think my experiences in life can carry me forward to peak performance in a career in the United States armed services.
Thank you for your time. I am confident that this board’s diligence to duty will lead to a successful commissioning of me into the armed forces.
Thank you.
Thankfully,
Marc “Trubbie” Goldstein
I got a college degree.. and its for being an officer. I was told i need an essay. and writing isnt my strong point