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kieran h
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its basicaly a thriller,its a group of friends traveling to hungary for a holiday,but have to split up in traveling there,thats the part of the story you will be seeing,its not a thriller yet as its the only the start,but can you review and give me constructive criticism?
‘Finally here ,thank god’ says Heno as he unbuckles his seatbelt ,while opening the passenger door with his free hand. ‘aye ive never been to Cork airport before’replies Richie as he stretches his arms , nearly poking Nicola in the forehead,who suddenly jumps out of a sleep startely shouting ‘ wheres my fags’. Ishy turns around slowly and sarcastically points out that there probably in her pocket.Which they turn out to be.
The boot of the car slowly rirses to the top to reveal six bags of luggage and for some unknown reason a broken radio.’ so what time are the lads meeting us in Hungary’ asks Ishy sleepy eyed and half startled at the petruding sun. ‘bout 8 tonight,so that will be like 11 Hungarian time,cuz I sure we’ll b there by then ‘ replies Heno’,as the sound of planes fly over head sounding like a jet powered hoover.the group grabbed all there bags and a quick fag before checking in and double checking the time of their flight,which was due to leave at 3.30pm Dublin GTM+.As the group waited patiently ,they noticed a man who was seated across from them and every so often fixing his eyes on the group, ‘ seriously tho lads whats he looking at’ Nicola anxiously said but giggling to cover up her natural fear,’fuck him bah,only a peadophile ide say’ Heno said to lighten the mood.But no longer after Heno had finished the sentence the man with a determined and anguished face stood up and approached the group ‘ shit shit shit’ Richie nervously said as the man grew closer,and stopped directly in front of the group dropping a small bag to his feet,the man then in his late 40’s with agieng skin and reciding hairline lent over with a look of pain in his eyes , probably a tense back said in a calm cool voice ‘do you know what time the flight to Rome is?’ there was an akward silence before Ishy replied ‘ ahh… sorry I don’t know,where going to hungary’ the man smiled and before leaving wished the group good luck,’fuckin hell that was a bit scary’ Heno said as he put his hands on his head .’aye that was quite mental’ replied Richie with a grin on his face.
‘TEEESSS,hurry up we’ll b late ‘ Zane shouted abruptly out the car window’ as Tess strolled back to the car and hoped back in ‘shut up,flight is not for another few hours plenty of time my dear’ she replied camly.Tess started the car and started to pull out of the petrol station where they had stopped to get food for herself,Zane and Cory who was sitting in the back rubbing his hands together to heat them as this particular morning was frighteningly cold.This group wher heading to Dublin to catch there flight as they had booked there tickets later and could only get Dublin at 5.00pm.’ah yaaa backstreet boys’ zanr said excitedly as he shuffled threw the pink ipod bursting with glee whilst rotating his finger to turn up the volume ‘BACKSTREET’S BACK ARIGHT’ both Zane and Tess sang to the top of their lungs ,as Cory sat in the back nodding his head in this belief at the cheese he is listning too,’ come on cory bah cheer the fuck up’Zane stated aggressively before having a slight giggle at Corys reaction to the music.
Miles and hours past before the group entered Dublin along with a lot of cheesy songs,which had Cory in a right state of affairs.They entered the Dublin airport carpark spaces and to their amazment there was a lot of free spaces which would save them a lot of time and energy.They checked their tickets and passports one last time before leaving the car, and then began grabbing their luggage and heading for the terminal where they had to check in an hour before take off,well to them fifthy minutes as they were ten minutes late,but that’s nothing unusual when Tess is behind the wheel.
‘My ears are seriously going to pop’ said Richie as the plane started to decend into the Nagkoros airport,which was only a ten minute car ride to the villa the two groups where staying in in the near by town of Kecskemet.’ so like is it hot over here or whats the story’ Nicola added as she turned to Ishy, ‘ what,ah ya ,I don’t know,dosent matter sure,we got the flights and place for cheap,should be a good laugh’ replied Ishy as his fingers dug deep into his roasted peanuts.
‘Finally here ,thank god’ says Heno as he unbuckles his seatbelt ,while opening the passenger door with his free hand. ‘aye ive never been to Cork airport before’replies Richie as he stretches his arms , nearly poking Nicola in the forehead,who suddenly jumps out of a sleep startely shouting ‘ wheres my fags’. Ishy turns around slowly and sarcastically points out that there probably in her pocket.Which they turn out to be.
The boot of the car slowly rirses to the top to reveal six bags of luggage and for some unknown reason a broken radio.’ so what time are the lads meeting us in Hungary’ asks Ishy sleepy eyed and half startled at the petruding sun. ‘bout 8 tonight,so that will be like 11 Hungarian time,cuz I sure we’ll b there by then ‘ replies Heno’,as the sound of planes fly over head sounding like a jet powered hoover.the group grabbed all there bags and a quick fag before checking in and double checking the time of their flight,which was due to leave at 3.30pm Dublin GTM+.As the group waited patiently ,they noticed a man who was seated across from them and every so often fixing his eyes on the group, ‘ seriously tho lads whats he looking at’ Nicola anxiously said but giggling to cover up her natural fear,’fuck him bah,only a peadophile ide say’ Heno said to lighten the mood.But no longer after Heno had finished the sentence the man with a determined and anguished face stood up and approached the group ‘ shit shit shit’ Richie nervously said as the man grew closer,and stopped directly in front of the group dropping a small bag to his feet,the man then in his late 40’s with agieng skin and reciding hairline lent over with a look of pain in his eyes , probably a tense back said in a calm cool voice ‘do you know what time the flight to Rome is?’ there was an akward silence before Ishy replied ‘ ahh… sorry I don’t know,where going to hungary’ the man smiled and before leaving wished the group good luck,’fuckin hell that was a bit scary’ Heno said as he put his hands on his head .’aye that was quite mental’ replied Richie with a grin on his face.
‘TEEESSS,hurry up we’ll b late ‘ Zane shouted abruptly out the car window’ as Tess strolled back to the car and hoped back in ‘shut up,flight is not for another few hours plenty of time my dear’ she replied camly.Tess started the car and started to pull out of the petrol station where they had stopped to get food for herself,Zane and Cory who was sitting in the back rubbing his hands together to heat them as this particular morning was frighteningly cold.This group wher heading to Dublin to catch there flight as they had booked there tickets later and could only get Dublin at 5.00pm.’ah yaaa backstreet boys’ zanr said excitedly as he shuffled threw the pink ipod bursting with glee whilst rotating his finger to turn up the volume ‘BACKSTREET’S BACK ARIGHT’ both Zane and Tess sang to the top of their lungs ,as Cory sat in the back nodding his head in this belief at the cheese he is listning too,’ come on cory bah cheer the fuck up’Zane stated aggressively before having a slight giggle at Corys reaction to the music.
Miles and hours past before the group entered Dublin along with a lot of cheesy songs,which had Cory in a right state of affairs.They entered the Dublin airport carpark spaces and to their amazment there was a lot of free spaces which would save them a lot of time and energy.They checked their tickets and passports one last time before leaving the car, and then began grabbing their luggage and heading for the terminal where they had to check in an hour before take off,well to them fifthy minutes as they were ten minutes late,but that’s nothing unusual when Tess is behind the wheel.
‘My ears are seriously going to pop’ said Richie as the plane started to decend into the Nagkoros airport,which was only a ten minute car ride to the villa the two groups where staying in in the near by town of Kecskemet.’ so like is it hot over here or whats the story’ Nicola added as she turned to Ishy, ‘ what,ah ya ,I don’t know,dosent matter sure,we got the flights and place for cheap,should be a good laugh’ replied Ishy as his fingers dug deep into his roasted peanuts.