ideas and suggestions for my short story.?

tom stanwood

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i have plenty of ideas but i think listening to your ideas and suggestions would improve me :) here is my story:

Witching Hour

2:56

I'm lost in the damned forest. The cold wind is blowing through my skin, it gives me chills. I look at my watch, 2: 56. The Witching Hour is starting. It is the time when the evil spirits and demons and wicked witches and goblins are preying on humans

The end of my hair stands when the wolves howl and I can see their evil red eyes staring at me like they are going to swallow me whole. I walk faster to avoid them, but they are like a tunnel full of glowing orbs. I can’t keep them out of my sight.

2:59

Time is running out....(and that's all)

i would like to see your ideas :) thx
 
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