id love some opinions on my poem?

mish

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Two Hearted Impact

She feels warmth in your presence,
loneliness in your distance,
no grip safe enough to hold onto..
She knows love’s at her feet,
the world's at her door,
there's endless skies and deep oceans..
She's enclosed in her mind,
and alive in her heart,
the fire's furious to ignite..
She feels there's a pattern,
the pain reimbursing,
only one to hide it undercover..
She lies in her sanctuary,
on moonlight parade,
so beautiful, yet not one desire..
She's afraid to walk out,
take chance against comfort,
make the dive, risk the fall..
As he sights, he may not know,
the intention, the sunshine backdrop,
that paints on her smile and dampens her fears..




thanks heaps for answering, if you do!

:)
 
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