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RzorWolfe

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On paper
I can hide behind
my pen
and its revisions

I can arrange the
perfect line
breaks
for dramatic effect

I can write
with such an endearing
tongue
you would think
I could talk
Like I write

Chicago is a windy city
and it blew the
beautiful love poem
from my hand
with a sigh
at the rightwrong
moment

The paper floated on
down the street
and I watched it go
without thinking anything at all

"We cant leave this undone," she said

But it came apart
so easy
 
This is my favourite type of writing, in my opinion. Page breaks can make a whole lot of difference if used correctly. I see you're still up to your usual standard.
 
Great job breaking each thought down. The line breaks add tons of effect on the contenst. I write entirely too much when I make poems, tis why I use commas. Which obviously has less affect then a line break.
 
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