i wrote this tell me whatcha think =]?

J_trizz

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let me know -
[screaming] sometimes when your with me I just cant help but think what it would be like to hold you. [singing] girl you've been on my mind an i gotta know how you feel bout me so you've gotta let me know ohh girl let me know When i'm walking all alone along this dark road i think of how there would be more light if you were by my side [screaming]could it ever be ? you an me ?{singing chorus}let me know if you feel it too sometimes i think you do your gonna have
to choose. [everyone] Whoa oh whoa oh whoa oh ah oh oh ah [screaming]could it ever be ? you an me {chorus singing} let me know if you feel it too sometimes i think you do your gonna have to choose. if this wont work between you an me ..... could this ever be the same {singing chorus} let me know if you feel it too sometimes i think you do your gonna have to choose. {outro fade out getting softer } Whoa oh whoa oh whoa oh ah oh oh ah
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an now working on this this is almost done


my forgotten silhoette -

[intro] when im looking back at these old pictures i think of all the times we shared
reambering we where so happy together... but now its gone [ shouting ] but now im
all alone looking back at these old pics of you an me it was a bitter sweet love [chours]
you're my forgotten silhouette ---------------------------------- your just my forgotten silhouette
------------------------ as im looking at these pics i feel like we're just fading black its never
just plain black and white [shouting] but now im all alone looking back at these old pics
of you an me it was a bitter sweet love [chours] you're my forgotten silhouette ---------------------------------- your just my forgotten silhouette ------------------------------ ...
thanks mrosesamples :D for help
 
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