I wrote this song, Is it good?

[Chanel E]

Okay well it goes like................

So baby here we go
I'm falling in love
I wonder if he wonders where
I'm at at all
I know I'm just way to plain
Too see
So baby here we go
I guess he doesn't know
That I think about him
In the rain or snow
I know he's just
way to good for me
Chorus:
No one loves you like
I do
Please come rest your
Head and see about me
No one loves you like I do
Bleed until we become restless

So baby here we go
I'm falling in love
And I never thought
I'd be a victim of this
Crazy sweet pure serenity
So baby here we go
I'm falling on the floor
I walk into walls when I hear
Your voice
And It's clear to see
Love ain't so easy

Is it good? Or should I work on it?

 

[Manderz:)]

well i think its very good. but the beginning kinda confuses me. other than that its great

 

[Kelanmaster]

o yes you are very good at writing songs! o my i love it!!

 

[catluvr29]

It's Good!
I like it =)

 

[karlito]

It's not terrible. Put some kind of music to it and you'll get better answers.
By far not the worst thing I've ever seen.