I wrote this song. Do you like it?

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I wrote this song and i want to know if people like it. I also want title ideas if you can think of any. thank you!


leaving myself behind
not nowing where I'm going
all I know is that I'm never coming back
never gonna be myself again
never gonna have another true friend

burning tears
boiling blood
black hearts
back stabbers
help me find my way
cause i'm...

on cliffs edge
I want to let go
slipping into the depths
wishing all my fears would leave
me to my peace
tears burn my eyes
every second of my life
I try to be strong
i try to hold on
but my fingers are slipping

fighting for control
i take a step back and look at myself
all i see is pain hurt and regret
i can't stand myself
searching for a way to see myself as beautiful
but i find no results

tears stream down my cheeks
as i cry myself to sleep every night
finding more ways to cover up my pain


burning tears
boiling blood
black hearts
back stabbers
help me find my way
cause i'm...

on cliffs edge
I want to let go
slipping into the depths
wishing all my fears would leave
me to my peace
tears burn my eyes
every second of my life
I try to be strong
i try to hold on
but my fingers are slipping


lies fill my eyes
and useless tries
down the long roads of my life
losing myself to everything wrong in their eyes

burning tears
boiling blood
black hearts
back stabbers
help me find my way
 
Yes I love it, i think you should be a famous song writer, that is amazing, i love it :) xx
 
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