I wrote this poem how is it? Is it ok?

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Run to the light that twists and turns, dear Alice
And away from the dark that engulfs, my friend.
Run from that darkness that chases with malice,
And toward the safety of light ahead.

But wait! Is the shimmer really a palace?
Is it everything you have ever wanted?
Or is it mocking the trick of a chalice,
By hiding it’s venom behind a pretend?

Run from the artifice that kills, dear Alice
It has burned the mask of benevolence, my friend
Run from the tricks that have hidden cruel malice,
And back to your home so this nightmare will end

But keep this in mind and do not be careless,
For this advice will sheild you from the world’s dread.
Do not judge a book by it’s cover, dear Alice
In this world such mistakes can be lethal, my friend.


Ok so this is from the point of veiw of the Cheshire Cat from Alice in Wonderland and he's talking to Alice. How was it? I have no confidence so I don't trust my own opinion...
oh yeah some of the lines don't rhyme exactly they're half-rhymes.
 
It's quite good (I love the way the Cheshire Cat talks in this), but if you're looking to rhyme every other line, some don't really match. =P

Wanted = Pretend?

Dread = Friend?

Alice = Careless?
 
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