I wrote this poem for my bf. How is it?

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Peace & Love
his kiss is as soft as a dove.
He makes me smile all the time,
& he is just so fine.
I'm the flower & he is the bee,
When we come together we become equally.
I realized it all long is our LOVE really that strong?
& every time i see his face,
my heart begins to race.
I never thought of him this way,
but now I think of him all day.
I wrote this poem to show u,
that u fill me with so much joy.
I wrote this poem to tell u,
Hope we'll stick together like glue.
 
Umm.... U should change the last part, because at the end it made me laugh but the rest was good.
 
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