I wrote this poem for a girl I was dating, opinions on it?

calm+chill

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You know im a little shy at first, any touch from you and my heart may burst.
In my stomach are butterfly's, i know you can see it in my eyes.
I got this dorky smile on my face, as I look at you and you have such grace.
Im getting nervous when I speak, all of a sudden my knee's start feeling weak.
Im insecure when your around, no where to look, so im looking down.
The softness of your voice finds my ears, and from my eyes comes a tear.
Sometimes I get dizzy and can hardly see, because you got this power over me.
I haven't felt this way in a long long time, I always got you on my mind.
And despite how bad these things might seem, being with you is my only dream.
Because im in heaven when im with you, and when your not here I dont know what to do.
 
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