Anyways I wrote a haiku for a scholarship, and was looking for some feedback. you can find it here http://www.directtextbook.com/haiku/6705. Maybe if you like it you will vote for me, who knows. Always looking for ways to better my work, I am not much of a poetry person so all comments are welcome. Thanks!
The link did not work here is a new one. http://www.directtextbook.com/haiku/6705
Also, the objective was to capture the essence of going back to school. Just so you all know. I guess I am not good at asking questions on yahoo as well
Here is the Haiku for those who wish not to click on the link
A place of knowledge
One can go anywhere from here
Future with no fear
The link did not work here is a new one. http://www.directtextbook.com/haiku/6705
Also, the objective was to capture the essence of going back to school. Just so you all know. I guess I am not good at asking questions on yahoo as well
Here is the Haiku for those who wish not to click on the link
A place of knowledge
One can go anywhere from here
Future with no fear