I wrote something in English. Would you check it?

mango

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I am a student learning English.
I wrote as it came to mind in order to enhance my English skill.
Would you check to see if there are any awkward expressions?

My friend posted the advertisement online to sell his TV the other day. One man called him and he said that he wanted to buy it. He came to my friend's house to see it in person and he was fond of it and wanted to take it, so we helped him move it to his trunk. While doing it, he said that he was a minister and he asked my friend what his religion was. His religion is Buddhism. However, he just said that he did not have any religions, because he didn't want to be involved in any kinds of religious argument. Some of Christians tend to reveal their antagonism against other religions explicitly, so I could understand his response. And then, the minister said "You don't have a religion? Huh, you are so brave." We knew that that minister sneered at him. His statement contained the meaning that my friend lived without thinking deeply. In my country, we sometimes use "brave" as the meaning of "ignorant or uneducated" in a sarcastic way. My friend just smiled at him, but I was really pissed off. Such people drive me up the wall. They are not religious. They are just nosy and try to justify their greed to exert their influence over others' lives, only through which they can get pleasure. Actually he insulted his God by neglecting one of the children of his God.

Thank you in advance.
 
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