here's my poem..
Bright and yummy
Candy in my tummy
Sour or sweet
They make a great treat
Red, orange, yellow
They cheer me up when I’m mellow
Green, purple, blue
You can’t just eat a few
Candies that become a rainbow
Make me happy when I’m feeling low
Colors so bright like the summer sky
They’re the greatest candy, I would not lie
With a small white emblem on one side
I love skittles, it’s nothing to hide
Savoring each taste like a leprechaun treasuring his gold
Each one is so vibrant and very bold
The sugar rush reaction is fireworks exploding
It is chewy and fruity under that colored coating
Skittles make the tastiest party favors
Because each small, round oval is bursting with flavor
[[this is where i am missing two lines. preferably in couplet form]]
Oh, candy galore
Skittles? Yes please,
I sure do want more!
please if you have any suggestions or feed back let me know.
i am not very good with poetry and could use any advice you may have.
Bright and yummy
Candy in my tummy
Sour or sweet
They make a great treat
Red, orange, yellow
They cheer me up when I’m mellow
Green, purple, blue
You can’t just eat a few
Candies that become a rainbow
Make me happy when I’m feeling low
Colors so bright like the summer sky
They’re the greatest candy, I would not lie
With a small white emblem on one side
I love skittles, it’s nothing to hide
Savoring each taste like a leprechaun treasuring his gold
Each one is so vibrant and very bold
The sugar rush reaction is fireworks exploding
It is chewy and fruity under that colored coating
Skittles make the tastiest party favors
Because each small, round oval is bursting with flavor
[[this is where i am missing two lines. preferably in couplet form]]
Oh, candy galore
Skittles? Yes please,
I sure do want more!
please if you have any suggestions or feed back let me know.
i am not very good with poetry and could use any advice you may have.